#30: "The Sea Who Loved Narcissus"

Published on 18 May 2025 at 16:26

Inspired by myths (and modern retellings), walks to the beach, and rhyme scheme experimentation.

There once was a man

Almost sunken in the sea

To stalk the vast blue tide

And be as near to love

As he could be.

 

Once there was this man

The sea halted her drowning

Tucked away her salt blades

Awaited his dive, and dreamed

Of the sea king’s crowning.

 

But what he always saw was

Never the pale assail of foam

Never the heaving breathing wave

He loved what he never gave

He loved only himself.

 

And the sea queen soon saw

What the man she worshipped became:

Slowly hollowed like driftwood

Blind as the sun

A longing false gaze

 

Once, this corpse of a man

Betrayed the lovely shore.

But the ocean is still merciful.

I let him lie

With the seabed, forevermore.

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